ENGL147 Hackett Law Firm Legalizing Marijuana Follow up Question

QUESTION

Detail the 3 most significant issues found in your review, placing them in the order of importance (the basis for a revision plan of action). As you write, be specific in which areas you are referring to, such as the introduction, claim, counterargument, etc., and how it relates to your experience with the writing process.
Research ways to correct the problem, in our textbook and lesson, library writing references, or external sources. Provide an example of at least one corrected based on these resources.

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