first draft general report i need to fix the mistakes 2

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The subject is: Does oil have a future?

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The introduction need to be fix. it does not set the context well. Thesis statement weak

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you have the basis of a good report here. The main weakness is you are merely presenting the information rather than using it to address the question. You leave the reader to make the connection. You have to make the connection

 

 

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